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My name is Cholo. I'm a writer, I'm a literature major, and these are the unrelated bits of information I call my life.

November 15, 2009 at 2:38am
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Paranormal Activity was nice.

It was scary, and it was entertaining.

My only problem with it, really, is the storytelling. There is none. There is no story, and, there are people but there are no characters. It’s a tale. A sloppy one put together to make you scared. There’s nothing wrong with this of course, but there is just so much wasted potential.

It was a ride. I had fun.

But, it could have been so much more.

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